The sea is dark.. calm waves lap at my feet..
A tidal waves churns inside me.. tears flow freely... i hug myself.. i feel cold
Knees buckle, flop down, my heart too heavy and I lose myself in the oceans' rhythm.
It's over but i can't get over it.. in my mind i want you to go away.. but my heart knows.. it wants you to stay..
My fingers play with the wet sand and before i realise what i'm doing, they write your name.. clear and bold... embossed and engraved.. a tear falls on you... your name.. it smudges it a little.. blurs it.. past my tear-filled eyes...
And, i smile.. i know what to do...
I stay a few more minutes and then get up..
I walk away and look back just once to watch the waves wash you away... your name away...
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remember the optimistic person who went to shit in the sea shore and waited for the waves to come and clean his bum...
the tsunami came.. and it washed him
Sweet :-)
I know why this has been written:-) I also know how it is like! Cheer up di and yes, you did it. And be strong which i know you are.Keep the spirit up and thats part of being you as well:-) :-)
And i somehow LIKE this new 'anusha'?:P
May I tag along? I could use that walk away from where I'm now.
@ chriz
how is it that u make my most serious post sound like a comic?
@ swati
ty ty :P
@ arc
don publicize dear :P unaku theriyum nu enaku theriyum
@ arv
be my guest :)
niceeee!
Nice one again... i have no words de.. u are an awesome writer :)
Buck up Anusha!! :) I lurve you :P :)
so very different from wat u normally write...me loves it!!!
Beautiful:)
Been here first time...you write honestly
Been here first time...you write honestly
@ achishek
thanks man :)
@ swetha
hahaha... so sweet of u de... :) thanks heaps
@ thoorika
love u too, dear
@ mayz
i know... i'm writing on LOVE.. can u believe tat? :P
@ kitty
thanks
I thght you like publicity:P Proof: Our gtalk blog traffic increasku nee panna vela:P Want publicity?:P
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Hmmm... thats a very thought-provoking one.... and very nice in terms of emotions...
But if this is more than just a poem, then cheer up de! And move on! :)
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