The Shadow....


As the moon threw its shadow on the open sea,

He leaned closer and whispered to me;

"Do you see the moon profess his love to the sea?

Who in turn shone brighter, like a prisoner set free?

Look closer at them both... there's you and me"

25 comments:

Elvia said...

Oh u could see ur reflections in the moon lit water!

Vaporizing Phantasm said...

Subtle brilliance in the expression of the emotion

Could only wish that this "he" is beter justified with character.

He seems so wonderful!

awesome!

The abstract scientist said...

wonderful!! nice imagination and articulation!

Diya said...

I am at loss for praising you...!! It is simply awesome... Kudos for this piece :)

ABHISHEK SiM said...

again brilliant!

The abstract scientist said...

http://www.flickr.com/photos/judilson/2591444928/

Hey , check this picture.

The abstract scientist said...

This was shot by me in Wales. It looks so similar to your picture. Where did you get this from?

Chronicwriter said...

enna aachu unakku.. kavidhai ellaaam

chrizis this elvia @ kitty still blogging in the girl's name?

Arv said...

romba yosika try pannadhey :P

wonder why the moon and the sea... hmmm...

it was a nice write still :)

ki said...

This is brilliant! :D

Romantic :)

amit said...

Very romantic!

Stupidosaur said...

Emm..I thought Sea is a 'she' (sailors refer to 'her' I think) and Moon is male (Chand aur uski Chandni sorts).

Apart from that artistic liberty, its good.

I read
"Prisioner yet free"
instead of
"Prisioner set free"

'Kinda' 'true' about 'love' 'I' 'think'

(The general convention of language is that the words in single quotes are to be taken with a pinch of salt)

Swetha said...

hmmm enna nadakudu nu teriyala.. the post is nice.. aiii unmaya sollu... ore the peelings..:P

and ur blog skin is veryyy gud de! :)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ elvia

WHAT?!??!

@ Valia

:) thanks man :) yes he's wonderful isn't he ;) only wish he'd exist :P

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ abstract

yea that pic i took off google.. some flickr pic only.. changed it man..

thanks :)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ diya

thank u so much :)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

abhishek

yes... ur blog friend only no :P

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ chriz

ungala maadri eludha mudiyala.. so vera maadri try panren sir

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ arv

hehehehe thanks bro

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ ki @ amit

romantic? :) thanks

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ stupidosaur

omg!! thanks for reminding me.. i initially intended the moon to b male n sea to b female.. i guess i got lost with the flow :)

thanks again for pointing it out

and i agree with the single quoted lines ;)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ swetha

yes yes thank u .. ore feelings only :P

Mayz said...

anusha is in lowweee
anusha is in lowwweee

ya ya ya ya ya!!!

Amal Bose said...

that was brilliant work..
loved it :-)

Arc said...

Ena ma aachu unakku? Nee sarilla:P

That was a beautiful verse:-)

And makeover for the blog. Nice, nice:-):-)