Past the desolate woods... deeper... deeper...
A clearing appears... and a river...
I move to the edge... breathing it in...
The water is so calm... the woods so silent..
I touch the water... soft as silk...
The touch disturbs its sanctity and ripples appear... i am ashamed...
"It's okay", he says. A warm sensation on my shoulder... "I am here".
A smile creeps its way onto my lips...
"Forever?", i ask, suddenly breathless.
The wind blows his whisper by my ears..."Forever".
I touch the water once again, the tip of my finger prodding it...
It is patient... ripples no more....
I am puzzled. I turn and look up at him....
He laughs... comes close to my ear and whispers...
"The water is jealous"
"Why?"
"Because it won't be around as long as i will be"
42 comments:
very cute de :) liked it.. i feel its very meaningful :)
Who?Who?Who?
Nice stuff though.
Jalas
Anusha...why!?!!!WHY!?-C
WHY WHY WHY....
HOW HOW HOW...
:P
but its sho beautiful da :)
Hey, Lovely poem. well jotted feelings. Is the he a he or'He'?
yaaravan?
andha kittyaaa?
hehe :P
hey wolf where are the rest???
ok let me complete it for you...
"And so he said, "I am fed up with you so decided to put a full stop to our relationship and I know you don't know how to swim..." With these final words he gives her a gentle push. There ends the not so famous wolf's life"
(inspired from the song Vaarai Nee Vaarai)
Awww. :)
Very touching. :)
Is it for someone special? ;)
ola ..thats really cool
Lovely poem. :)
bizarre in a profound and nice way! quite beautiful.
the last line was SOMEthing else!
so the wolf is in love!
you make me feel more desperate to search for a female friend! i m stuck in one of the FrEAky LEAST endowed places :( and yeah no copyrights and etc. with this post right? i m planning for a verbatim reproduction of this masterpiece for the special someone.
oh no - not a verbatim... but an inspired version of this :)
@ swetha
;) thanks de... yea meaningful only :P
@ valia
who? i think u know the answer.. lol
@ anony
who?What?Where?
@ arv
ahem!! i see u r in love :P
@ scientist
hahahaha... good question... can be both... i think its Him tho
@ Chriz
What pa.. talking as if u dunno... its u only :P hehehehe
P.S: I was kidding... will never write such beautiful posts abt u
@ lance
My last line and ur climax are not at all connected.. get eyes checked
@ ki
my hot neighbour... yea :P
P.S If i had a special someone i wudn't be writing it here... wud tell him in person.. dam! :P
@ farah and journokid
thank u thank u
@ Srini
welcome to my blog :) thanks for the compliment.. keep visiting
@ rakesh
ahem!!!! Wolf is so NOT in love
@ abhishek
awwww u can use it :P but u give me credit.. tell ur someone spl that a good frnd helped ;) hahahaha
and don't worry... ur girl wil find u :P
is this abt ur new neighbour???
if it is give him a pat on d back from mah side for bringin out this kinda beautiful thots outta u :)
@ mayz
ahem! no its not him... yet ;)
wow!! this one was so beautiful!! the last line stole my heart.. too too too too tooooooo good!! :D
hey .. I hate to admit it but its really nice!!!! you have been reading lots of mills and boons lately?!
@ pink
thank u soooo much :)
@ thoorika
hahahaha :P atlast u admit and no i don read m&b
wow..! Wonderfully expressed :)
@Chriz:-
LOL
@Wolfie:-
he he he..ha ha ha...nee ipdi emotionala ezhudinaa naanga unna nambioduvomaa?
P.S:- Its been AGES since u last visited my page. I hope u appreciate my existence sometimes:-)
sure! hope to keep coming back!
//"The water is jealous"
"Why?"
"Because it won't be around as long as i will be"//
You are like Chinna Kalaivaanar Vivekh.. A social message at the end which others failed to crack.. If we waste water and because of global warming, it wont be around for long!!
And please i do ask you, keep our visits and romances in secret.. Don publish it in blog.. Already my girl friends EMMA and VANESSA are red-eyed knowing I took you to the river.. So.. :P
WHO WHO WHO??? dun temme its tht neighbour guy who is supposedly HOT to ur eyes.. :( :p
Nikhil
@Karthik:-
Wolf solla vela. Ipa vaavadhu unma vandhudhae:P:P
Vaneesa and Emma? Cha, avanga thookla thongalam
:) too good re. Lovely ending :)
@ diya
thanks welcome to my blog :) keep visiting
@ karthik
u are great... and no ur NOT who i wrote that for :P
@ multi
not my neighbour... PLEZZZZ! :P
@ arc
ahem!!! podhuma? :P
@ urv
thanks :)
Yeh this wonly it had to become in the end lol
But seriously, nice one :)
It was v touchy touchy :)
but why did he have to leave :(
anyhoo...that was beautiful :)
the picture spoke a thousand words.. so i didnt read the lines :)
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