Waiting..



I will wait whilst time flies,
Till you smile; there my happiness lies. 

I will wait till you break free,
And come again to be with me.

I will wait through day and wait through night,
Till i see the faintest light.

I will wait, till the end;
I will wait for you, my dear friend.

21 comments:

Chriz said...

who is that dear friend?
will that dear friend come back?
where did she/he go?

but when she/he comes back do remember to take a bath...

nice one wolfie

ABHISHEK SiM said...

strong lines.

leaves an gloom behind - the lost, the broken and the dead...

Diya said...

My wait is only for him, until he returns...
Nice :)

Swetha said...

tat dear frnd is a he or she :P :P... anyways a gud one :)

Arv said...

wait wait :P

MultiMenon said...

yeah..i know who,.....????? :p

Nikhil

Thoorika said...

Ahh.. Now I really like this one!!! Its really nice!!!

Ki said...

Sweet :)

amit said...

The thin line between reality and poetry is blurring. :P

Mayz said...

awesome lines thr

Pyaasa Sajal said...

7th line has a few redundant words..otherwise the poem is ok...

Devil Incarnate... said...

awesome lines...

Prabhu said...

Hope your wait achieves its destiny! :)

Amal Bose said...

beautiful lines..
loved it :)

DD said...

why are you waiting ?? i am right here ;)

hehehe..


nice piece :)

Arc said...

Looks like I ve missed out on a lot of posts. Was out of the online scene for a while:)

Wait..for who?;P

Miss Kido said...

Very well written :)

Aruna Iyer said...

Ur poetry has always had several effects on me...but the one that holds maximum wait is that it alienates my idea of the person u are....it makes me think u re a living facade...hiding 2 very different people within that one body...

As always..few words strung together in that intriguing fashion that is poetry of class...

Aruna Iyer said...

*weight!!!!! Typo there!!! :P

I suck!!! :D

Jobo said...

Just came across your blog from one of the comments left on Karan's blog. loved this.. "worth the wait"-

Sindhiya said...

I HAVE ARRIVED!!!!! May u rest in peace...