I will wait whilst time flies,
Till you smile; there my happiness lies.
I will wait till you break free,
And come again to be with me.
I will wait through day and wait through night,
Till i see the faintest light.
I will wait, till the end;
I will wait for you, my dear friend.
21 comments:
who is that dear friend?
will that dear friend come back?
where did she/he go?
but when she/he comes back do remember to take a bath...
nice one wolfie
strong lines.
leaves an gloom behind - the lost, the broken and the dead...
My wait is only for him, until he returns...
Nice :)
tat dear frnd is a he or she :P :P... anyways a gud one :)
wait wait :P
yeah..i know who,.....????? :p
Nikhil
Ahh.. Now I really like this one!!! Its really nice!!!
Sweet :)
The thin line between reality and poetry is blurring. :P
awesome lines thr
7th line has a few redundant words..otherwise the poem is ok...
awesome lines...
Hope your wait achieves its destiny! :)
beautiful lines..
loved it :)
why are you waiting ?? i am right here ;)
hehehe..
nice piece :)
Looks like I ve missed out on a lot of posts. Was out of the online scene for a while:)
Wait..for who?;P
Very well written :)
Ur poetry has always had several effects on me...but the one that holds maximum wait is that it alienates my idea of the person u are....it makes me think u re a living facade...hiding 2 very different people within that one body...
As always..few words strung together in that intriguing fashion that is poetry of class...
*weight!!!!! Typo there!!! :P
I suck!!! :D
Just came across your blog from one of the comments left on Karan's blog. loved this.. "worth the wait"-
I HAVE ARRIVED!!!!! May u rest in peace...
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