It's YOU....
Posted by
Elithraniel Arawion
on Thursday, February 26, 2009
Eyes follow my every step...
Hush! I turn and they are there...
At every turn of life they stare... unnerving... un-approving..
I try to hide but there is no place...
I try to ignore but they are always there... goosebumps go down my spine..
Shhh! don't tell the others... but they are not sympathetic..
My secrets are no longer mine... one good look and they're there...
The eyes know them all... see them all..
They see and tell... tell everything to the one place they shouldn't..
And soon i'm exposed... exposed to my heart..
A sense of numbness rushes in... my heart knows... she grows heavy...
Everything is silent...
but...
My eyes... they see and they tell.. they don't hide....
22 comments:
me the first...
Amazing poem...I never realised its the eyes which tells me everything- amazing creativity- what if I am blind then I will not know how the letter A will look I will not know that I look like Brad Pitt :P I will not know how disgusting Muthalik will look...sigh sight is the sight of knowledge...
listen to the song TROUBLE IS A FRIEND by LENKA - it runs in similar lines...
wow!!! someone once told me eyes r d windows to d soul...after readin this post of urs i cudnt agree more...so well written...u shud write these kinda pieces more often
are those wolfy eyes? :P
U got great eyes babe..!! Eyes r the gateway to what rly is goin thro YOU..Well said..
Nikhil
Well expressed wolfie:-)
Claps! :)
why lot of dots in between...
hey bought a 5 star choc for u...
nice lines though... my eyes r following you wolf
where is pussy cat kitty?
Ramblings of a movie star I'd say... :D
@ lancelot
wat a great explanation !!!!! and... nothing nothing... :P
@ mayz
really? it was good.. i was half asleep and doped when i wrote it :P shh! tats a secret
@ ARv
they might be.. ;)
@ multi
thank u thank u
@ arc
ty :)
@ prabu
*bows*
@ chriz
u'll say 5 star and then never giv it to me.. i 'll never forgive u!!
@ chriz
i think cat caught his tongue :P
@ namesis
i don think so.. everyone has their own secrets :P and rantings
@ Wolf
thanks for acceptance of the fact...
hi the second part of the NOAH story is updated
http://lancelot-oneofakind.blogspot.com/2009/02/shiva-noah-virococha-has-sms-for.html
wow.. beautiful eyes
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