It's YOU....


Eyes follow my every step...

Hush! I turn and they are there...

At every turn of life they stare... unnerving... un-approving..

I try to hide but there is no place...

I try to ignore but they are always there... goosebumps go down my spine..

Shhh! don't tell the others... but they are not sympathetic..

My secrets are no longer mine... one good look and they're there...

The eyes know them all... see them all..

They see and tell... tell everything to the one place they shouldn't..

And soon i'm exposed... exposed to my heart..

A sense of numbness rushes in... my heart knows... she grows heavy...

Everything is silent...

but...

My eyes... they see and they tell.. they don't hide....

22 comments:

Lancelot said...

me the first...

Lancelot said...

Amazing poem...I never realised its the eyes which tells me everything- amazing creativity- what if I am blind then I will not know how the letter A will look I will not know that I look like Brad Pitt :P I will not know how disgusting Muthalik will look...sigh sight is the sight of knowledge...

listen to the song TROUBLE IS A FRIEND by LENKA - it runs in similar lines...

mayz said...

wow!!! someone once told me eyes r d windows to d soul...after readin this post of urs i cudnt agree more...so well written...u shud write these kinda pieces more often

Arv said...

are those wolfy eyes? :P

MultiMenon said...

U got great eyes babe..!! Eyes r the gateway to what rly is goin thro YOU..Well said..

Nikhil

Archana said...

Well expressed wolfie:-)

prabhu said...

Claps! :)

Chriz said...

why lot of dots in between...

hey bought a 5 star choc for u...

nice lines though... my eyes r following you wolf

Chriz said...

where is pussy cat kitty?

Nemesis said...

Ramblings of a movie star I'd say... :D

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ lancelot

wat a great explanation !!!!! and... nothing nothing... :P

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ mayz

really? it was good.. i was half asleep and doped when i wrote it :P shh! tats a secret

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ ARv

they might be.. ;)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ multi

thank u thank u

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ arc

ty :)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ prabu

*bows*

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ chriz

u'll say 5 star and then never giv it to me.. i 'll never forgive u!!

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ chriz

i think cat caught his tongue :P

Elithraniel Arawion said...

@ namesis

i don think so.. everyone has their own secrets :P and rantings

Lancelot said...

@ Wolf

thanks for acceptance of the fact...

Lancelot said...

hi the second part of the NOAH story is updated

http://lancelot-oneofakind.blogspot.com/2009/02/shiva-noah-virococha-has-sms-for.html

Thinking Hat said...

wow.. beautiful eyes